Tuesday 18 January 2011
A Hunger Parody
My guitar... I have to find my guitar.... I just don't know where I left it. That guitar.... I need it to live. How will I produce the musical wonders that I write to survive! The people of Boston will feel so deprived. How can they live without me, supplying them with their daily fix of Grunge, which I learnt to enjoy while living in Seattle. Also, how would I be able to make money...? How would I.....? I just don't know.... my diabetes. The insulin I need to survive..... its been 2 days, and I can feel my brain running slowly. I need money, to give to the people at the shelter, that give me a place to sleep, while I work to spread the power of my music. That producer that stopped me the other day, he offered me a deal. Told me to cut down on the violent lyrics. I'd rather die. I can't believe that he would so viciously attack me. I guess I'm just going to have to struggle through, find a producer that understands the music. But stilll... I have to find my guitar...
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I noticed that you used the ellipses from the text, I think that the uses was good but a little overwhelming compared to the book. The similarities to the book is close because the protagonist in your imitation also jumps from idea to idea, like the protagonist in "Hunger." The way that this was also incorporated made the protagonist seem to really feel the hair-brained life of the character. The comparison to playing/writing music to the writing in "Hunger" convincing.
ReplyDeleteyou portrayed his absurdity well when you said he wants to spread the power of his music.i think the diabetes is an interesting idea. style pretty good the ... show his madness, the variety in punctaution is good too but i think you could bring more action words into it.
ReplyDeletethe thoughts are all over the place, with the unanswered questions, everything going on in his head. well done. the setting isnt mentioned because i guess it is not important.. the setting is his head, the conflicting environment of his own mind is enough for the reader.
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